verbose words merging into a yawn.... indeed....!
Yes, I love those last two lines...they pack a powerful punch! Great read.
INDEEEEEEED INDEEEEEEEEDD!!!lovely read!Muted Anticipations
Ouch! So much for those secrets!
sometimes...some things secret are best kept behind closed windows.To end some mysteries ...is to find there never was a mystery.
This is great.
love the last line, wonder what mundane secret that cause that yawn
Yes, the ending to this is excellent.
Was they that boring!I am sitting here laughing, because I have been in this place.
Really taken by this poem.....particularly the spread of letters behind the windows.....I read the last word as 'lawn' first!
LOVE those last two lines. Beautiful read, flowed sweetly.
I love how this piques the curiosity. All kinds of speculation for someone who is terminally nosy LOL
oouch..that had a bite..
talk about being dismissed!!
verbose words merging into my yawn is an excellent way to end this poem. hope all is well. have a great day.
palpitations, confrontation. enfin, a yawn of relief. enjoyed this immensely.
Been there; done that. :-)I loved the image in the last line there.
beautiful reality ;)
Good one!white curtains bellow from open windowPlease don't forget to post your creative works at Monday Poetry Train Revisited too!
Yup- has happened to me as well...nicely done!
a smile escapes my lips with a silent laugh...touche... there is movement in one's heart...
Wow, excellent ending! Lots of meaning in a few words.
Very clever - it can happen!! I guess it did...Nice work!
Check this too:journey with destination unknown
Oh Wow! I feel like doing that sometimes but only have once before. It was the greatest feeling, end of one (almost) and fresh start of next 'life # XX.'..
Hi Jeeves, thank you for the visit. This was my oldest and everyday blog and I was honored for you to see things not in the line of the poetry for OSI.My OSI is on my other blog, Jim's Little Photo and Poem Place. Here is a link. Please feel free to look around that blog as well.Jim's OSI..
very short but very powerfulAnticipating, Your Reality
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